A Deluge of Daydreams

A deluge of daydreams
burst from broken seams
of a courageous idealist,
drizzling memories; dream
compressing them
against my skin.

Dancing in their beauty;
twisting, twirling,wanting
to forget this vacancy
in my heart, carved
by acidic goodbyes.

Confidence streams across
my wandered mind in a
spectrum of colors; blooming
rainbows and smiling stars
sewn by threads of promise.

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8 thoughts on “A Deluge of Daydreams

  1. A well written hope-filled poem that uniquely displayed inspiration and the message you wanted to get across to your readers. Very uplifting, thanks for that smile Bhaskar!

    God bless you!

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  2. This went from sad to cheeerful in the most amazing way….indeed we should never give up hope..it is the one thing that keep us strong.

    Lovely poem, BT 🙂

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  3. A downpour of daydreams
    bursted from broken seams
    of a courageous idealist,

    ^^ the starting captured me… the analogy with rain is superb… so beautifully penned…

    to forget this vacancy
    in my heart, carved
    by acidic goodbyes-

    ^^ that was touching… goodbyes are never happy but some can leave a scar in our heart… the last line is brilliant…

    spectrum of colors; blooming
    rainbows and smiling stars
    sewn by threads of promise.

    ^^ another verse with splendid imagery… hopeful and beautiful… lovely lines…

    brilliant poem 🙂

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  4. “Confidence streams across
    my wandered mind in a
    spectrum of colors; blooming
    rainbows and smiling stars
    sewn by threads of promise.

    “sewn by threads of promise”..what a beautiful verse in such an excellent write. I loved the way you wove this piece. Well worth the wing. A very well done from me. Billy Rob

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